The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done to deal with this situation?
With the best economic and the quality of life ranks the prestigious position all over the world but the decrease in the birth rate quickly has been the most serious concern against developed countries. This trend jeopardizing the tenacious development and the prospective population size. On coming up against this problem, there are many solutions should be put forward to tackle as soon as possible.
If the government of such countries carry on letting this trend move further, they have to witness the best degrade things. First, the population size is not controlled can lead to the shortage of labor intensive. And it is more terrible gradually when ex-workers retire and employers are not able to find the trained resources in order to fill in the space which ex-workers left anymore. As a result, these countries no longer guarantee supplying the high quality of life for inhabitants. Secondly, large as well as families throughout national land will not have those who have the capable of carrying on family name, which can cause the negative impact on keeping the marvelous preceding civilization.
To prevent this trend from making every effort to be one of the integral part struggling against the prosperous country, the government must propose lots of direction to get the population size under control by anyway. They ought to hold conferences with the present of reproductive health exports who have enough the qualifications to give couples in child-bearing years advice about the miracle of having pregnancy. Moreover, they also take the volunteers to each house from the biggest urban to the outskirts so that they can talk to the great of importance to have babies.
To sum up, due to the interrelationship between population and development, the government are attempting to restrict on the decrease in the birthrate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17056856187 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89435851542 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4554615754 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159689118692 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496441384328 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423342915214 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803148712478 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051643080402 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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