The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.
The maps elucidate the alterations which happened in Youngsville in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred for the number of green areas which have been changes by several facilities in the town.
To begin with the south of the city, the existences of factories, skyscrapers and warehouse has replaced the position of numerous plants and dwellings in 1980. To the east of the skyscrapers, there was a new railway line which had been constructed in which it connected to the north of the town.
In accordance with the other alterations, there were significant changes for several new facilities from 1980, which had several houses, through to 2005, which changed to be a new stadium and a new parking area. 1980 to 2005, furthermore, witnessed a dramatic modification for the size of the green areas where it had been varied by a new park, and a new parking area in 2005. In contrast, the presence of the airport, school, parking area, which were located in the south of the town, and hospital, which was placed in the north of the city, remained unchanged over the entire period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67471333403 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510101010101 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5665515876 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.714285714 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23872123131 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120227620353 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905484274253 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15779434677 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077273002521 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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