Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages relying too much on technology?
It is often observed that nowadays the latest technological innovations have become very common in workplaces. This has proven to be quite effective with benefits like better throughout, less overhead and cost-effectiveness. However, relying too much on it could have some adverse effects in the long run. In this essay, both these points would be discussed.
Introducing enhanced technology at workplaces, where the industry is looking to reduce manual intervention, has played a significant role. Not only does it provide better output but also finishes the job in very less time. For example, a recent survey done by The New York Times in August 2018 resulted that ninety-five percent of the industry promotes the usage of modern technology as it has produced tremendous results saving them man hours and money. If the usage of modern technology continues to grow, not only would it complete the work by just a click of a button but can also be scheduled without man's presence.
Nonetheless, depending too much on technology has made man lazy which reduced their physical exercise making obesity a prevailing disease. The technology is so relied upon that people feel reluctant to apply their brains and hence, their logical, as well as application skills, have diminished. For instance, seventy percent of people prefer using a calculator for even a simple calculation. If this dependency grows, man would no longer be able to think wisely, making him unproductive.
In conclusion, modern technology ought to be introduced to aid man's efforts but not entirely replace it as excessive relying could prove to be a bane overshadowing all its benefits such as less manual effort, more time effectiveness, etc, that can be taken advantage from, by its usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96168203563 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635087719298 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1227073559 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189310134809 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650339830981 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387524257767 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107259592656 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317850623673 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.