You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from
a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the
University. In your letter,
Complain about the situation
Say why this is a problem
And propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Sir,
I am a 2nd-year Computer Engineering student currently residing in new boys hostel room no 1004 and would like to complain about the high level of noise coming from the new campus restaurant which has made my life miserable. Let me explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate the problem is that the new campus restaurant is located next to the new boy's hostel, therefore, the noise coming from the restaurant always creates disturbance for the students living in the hostel. Although during the day the noise from the restaurant hardly matters as most of the students are in the university campus attending classes however during the late night it disturbs most of the students who are completing their assignments or sleeping. Additionally, due to the noise coming from the restaurant, I was not able to prepare for the exams, therefore, I scored poorly.
Lastly, my suggestion would be either to shift the restaurant in the university campus near the new it building or make this restaurant a silent zone after 10 pm as this help in reducing the noise levels.
Hope you discuss the same with the facilities department and provide an immediate resolution.
Yours Sincerely
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am a 2nd-year Computer Engineering stu...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facilities'' or 'facility's'?
Suggestion: facilities'; facility's
...s. Hope you discuss the same with the facilities department and provide an immediate res...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... immediate resolution. Yours Sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.025 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73166158226 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4207283491 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238464935521 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860127020801 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550605702732 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124016410795 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311219521509 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.