It is much more convenient to watching movie on television or computer than to buy ticket and going to the cinema. In the nearest future, the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is an irrefutable fact that the extensive usage of technology has affected many areas, and cinema is one of them.It is said by someone that in coming years watching a movie in theatre will decrease on the popularity of Television shows or online resources. However, I agree with this notions and would discuss my views in next paragraphs.
Firstly, today watching a movie in a theatre as per the schedule time is difficult in this fast life and buying a ticket is all together a time consumed activity before actually watching a movie. For instance, If the person plans for the movie but in the last moment get stuck with work after planning so much wherein ends up in missing the movie which sadness the personal experience of a movie. Thus, in watching it online or televisions is as per people convenience which in turns lifts the person mood. Conveience is the major reason which in today's age people are really looking for not the larger than life experience screen.
Further, online or television has varieties of shows in different aspect such as movies, music, news, entertainment so on so forth. nowadays people can download their favourite movies or TV shows and watch them at their convenience. Moreover, people watch it on weekend with in their home theatre by enjoying and relaxing.
To end, watching a movie as per your conveinence would be increasing not going to theatre a watching a movie in large screen. people majorly want to explore an experience as per their availability and their own choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85440613027 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6655324139 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0905271186 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178334618008 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633649326597 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470375916457 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103645235499 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336003812892 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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