Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular.
Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions in this?
Over the past 50 years, Fast food saw a significant rise in availability and consumingness. Although some people worship its low cost and convenience, but I intend to argue that this kind of food is harmful both to the individuals who eat those and also, to the society at large.
My reasons for this argument are as follows.
First of all, It is clear that fast foods contain a high amount of fat and salt and for those who consume this kind of food to excess can result serious health problems such as obesity, heart diseases and high blood pressure. While it seems that Fast food is relatively cheap and affordable for everyone, I think that the ailments it causes later in life and the detrimental effects it has on a person’s body, is much more expensive and inconvenience.
Also, with fast foods availability and low costs, people tend to consume it more than their traditional foods because of the time shortage. Modern life is certainly a busy life. People work way more than any other time and there is no time for cooking old cuisines in their time table so many of them, perforce, choose fast foods instead of a healthy nurishment meal. And with putting aside our traditional and historical cuisines, we are destroying many flavors and plants that are not using in fast food industry. In other words, It may has some benefits in a short-term, but the negative effects in long-term surly outweigh.
Further and more importantly, the more fast food become popular, the more it changes food habits in the future and not in good way. Fast food chains like mcDonalds deliberately use commercials to attract children, so that children put pressure on parents for going down there over and over again. Then admittedly, parents become serious fast food users too. Within this addiction happening worldwide, we are seeing serious negative changes in eating habits and that can lead us to loads of different problems in the future.
By way of conclusion, I think Fast food will continue to remain a trend in food industry for a long time. But, given all the health risks associated with this trend, I believe that we need a serious public education to constantly warn and inform people about the dangers that fast food is putting them through in long-term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, while, i think, kind of, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82097186701 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61130454772 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542199488491 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1749727358 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731044294797 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337707922322 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115055858055 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024854694901 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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