Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, belive that school is the place to learn this.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While a group of people believe that Children should be taught to be a positive member of society by their parents, some people say that this school responsibility. In my opinion, both Parents and Schools plays an important role, but yet parents have much more power to teach pupils how to be a useful person for their society.
It is clear that parents know their child much more than a school member or a teacher and with this deep knowing and understanding, they can find the best way to talk to the kid about their behavior. For example, If a child misbehaves in any way, parents know how to convince them to stop the bad behavior. Also their emotional bond and family love, can lead the kid to accept their errors better and faster. Also children spend most of their time with their family members until certain ages and keep copying their behavior. So parents and other members of a family should be careful about their attitude and try to be decent role model.
On the other hand, Schools are the first example of a society for kids. School members should make appropriate rules for students and force them to follow these rules in a good and friendly manner. Teachers should encourage the children to take responsibilities and teach them how to work in groups and be a useful member. For example, They can make some group cooking programs and watch how everyone is doing and while helping the weak ones to improve, cherish the ones who did their job well.
In conclusion, Parents and School members both have a very important role to shape children minds and behaviors and I think both of these groups should be aware of their place and taught to be a decent role model for the pupils.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 73
- Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement? 78
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 29
- Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...convince them to stop the bad behavior. Also their emotional bond and family love, c...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... accept their errors better and faster. Also children spend most of their time with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6204620462 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34046691972 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3252396288 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288288633413 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117520094978 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853968819261 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21331164145 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839607241195 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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