Because of investor money, online shopping giants like Amazon are able to sell products even lower than their market rate. What problems does it cause? How can we counter these problems?
Many giant players like Amazon, flipkart and Myntra are famous names in online shopping business and have become the first choice for most consumers because of many reasons like discounted rate, time efficient and broad range of products availability. This change in shopping trend has many benefits along with some negative impact on the society in broader sense. This essay will discuss issues and the solutions around online shopping.
As online shopping continues to surge in the mobile space that includes cheaper prices, local spending as a result has slowed down. Nevertheless, local shops and malls run the risk of going out of business. They do not have the resources to set up online component of their services. These small set ups facilitate the local economic development. In the case of online shopping, most of the benefits go in the foreign companies like Amazon, Flipkart acquired by Wallmart a US based company hence no major contribution in local economy. Additionally, when products are available at lower rate, somewhere the quality of the product is not reliable.
To revive the local industries and make them competitive, the government should provide help in the form of subsidies to fund for online set up for these businesses. Apart from this, the owners of these shops also, should introduce innovative marketing strategy to attract consumers such as after sale services, home delivery and different discount schemes.
In conclusion, although e-commerce has become quite popular in the world today, but the strong regulation by the government is the need of hour to appease small traders to ultimately backing the local economic growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2734082397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66054720148 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632958801498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9814976493 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175249827307 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580488965916 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434399534352 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885605509335 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583965526827 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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