Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison.
What do you think are the cause of this ?
What possible solutions can you suggest ?
Nowadays, crime rate is augmenting by leaps and bounds in all over the world. Many offenders have re-committd crime after released from jail. This essay will discuss that out of numerous, criminal record and social behavior is the utmost cause of a re-offense, and suggest that there are various solution to this problem.
Firstly, background of a criminal is the major cause of stepping back to crime world because when apply for a job due to their offense history, rejected straight-away by various employer, thus unemployment will drag them from the right path. Secondly, social behavior is also one of the contributing factor for redo of a crime. To exemplify, after completing sentence, families do not accept them as they were in the past, neglected by society and consider as notorious person. As a result, many of them struggle financially and socially which eventually leads them back to crime, regardless of the consequences.
There are two effective solution to the problem of repeating crime by a person, one way to tackle this is to introduce rehabilitation programs during course of imprisonment. These rehabilitation programs might include psychotherapy, which helps them realize the severity of the offense and it ensures that it will not be repeated it in the future. To illustrate, Canadian Government has introduced a ‘Vocational Rehabilitation program’ for the welfare of the prisoners, so that they become active member of the society. Additionally, government can take initiative and help the criminal with the loans as start-up for business so that they can start business and flourish in future and leave their criminal life behind.
To conclude, criminal history and attitude of the society towards a former criminal urge them to re-commit crime, while vocational courses and with government support will refrain them from re-offense.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this rehabilitation' or 'These rehabilitations'?
Suggestion: This rehabilitation; These rehabilitations
...programs during course of imprisonment. These rehabilitation programs might include psychotherapy, w...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ate, Canadian Government has introduced a 'Vocational Rehabilitation program...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35472972973 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04417013092 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6552598407 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.083333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197008535743 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700131042788 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451212684574 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122894813153 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436691081927 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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