Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
Do you agree?
Health practitioners serve as a backbone in augmenting health condition of their patients and it is their moral duty to counsel patients about their ongoing disease condition and must suggest a way to extirpate it. This essay will agree with the statement followed by reasoned examples.
First and foremost, all professions have some job duties and it is the individual’s responsibility to deliver in a proper way. Educating patients about their ailments is one of the core role and responsibility of the physicians because they have studied medicine since years so their enormous experience in the relevant field makes them perfect source of information for the patient. For illustration, during treatment of tuberculosis, the doctor advice their patients about drug and food interactions along with the importance of being consistent in therapy because a single missed dose results in drug resistance.
Secondly, In this contemporary era, a major source of information is the internet and many people keep in my mind their symptoms and search for diseases. Without considering other factors, they do self-diagnosis and take self-medication therapy without knowing the devastating effects of this practice. Moreover, most of the data available on the internet regarding medical science is misleading whereas one must require prior knowledge to deal with such a condition. For instance, doctors design a therapy considering signs and symptoms, its possible adverse reactions and interactions with other drugs. Some drugs are contraindicated in some condition, hence, it is doctors duty to brief patient about all the possible ways to combat any haphazard situation.
To recapitulate, this essay agreed that everyone knows his business well, patient education is part of a doctor duty and due to background knowledge, they are considered as responsible for educating patients.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...vidual's responsibility to deliver in a proper way. Educating patients about their ailment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56944444444 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16440434539 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4598686791 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.818181818 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359408023729 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116177971205 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948226148749 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22052855449 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682731422966 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.