Write a letter to invite a famous person to give a speech at a meeting in you youth club. In your letter, you should:• introduce your club• explain why you want to invite him/her• tell him/her about the arrangement for the meeting

Dear Mr. Richard

I am writing to express my request regard invitation for you to the club for a speech to deliver on the day of its inauguration.

Our sports club is about cricket practice and coaching aimed at training and producing great cricket players like you. It is the only sports club with advanced net practice facility. It has over 10,000 enrolls already.

There is a need of a prominent cricket personality to deliver a speech in our club on the auspicious occasion of its establishment. As a matter of fact, it will be a great inspiration for young talent to grasp motivational advice from your successful cricket career.

Assessing a positive response we have arranged a pick and drop facility for your convenience. On the occasion you will be honored and will experience great hospitality with utmost care.

I request to please manage to take out some time for a great cause.

Yours sincerely
Rasheed raheel.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, as a matter of fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99358974359 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80065122276 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9880244288 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222425984707 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765298254481 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532281622924 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112595400815 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639864945343 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.