Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Globalized world make people closer together than past which in turn facilitate for getting many types of information about numerous events that daily happens in the world. In this case, most of the people hold the opinion that it is not necessary to be aware of that incident but, I concur with the opposite view; I believe that it is crucial to being conscious about the events happening around the world. In the following paragraph I explain my points with three reasons.
First, acquiring information always keeps us updated which can indirectly make ease our life in manifold. We have to do several things in our practical life, move different places for many reasons. The events that happened in another country also can make us informed or warn us about it. For instance, the terrorist attack of Pakistan, although this horrible incident is not important to us but it might help us to be aware about our movement. It also informs us the information about the terrorist in the world.
Second, Information makes us more confident to talk to others in many cases in our day to day life. We are now doing work on different places, we have to be more social and make good relationship with other people in our surroundings to lead life in a better way. All of these process requires to communicate with other people so, if we have little knowledge about our world how can we continue our discussion with others? For example, few days ago one of my best friend wanted to go to Thailand for better treatment but asked me about the food available in Thailand, I immediately told her that Thailand’s food are not very well suited for the people of Bangladesh on the account of, one day I saw a documentary about the food in Thailand on national geography channel.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that every person should be more up to date and be aware of our living world by knowing events that happens in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...e view; I believe that it is crucial to being conscious about the events happening ar...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'communicating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: communicating
...tter way. All of these process requires to communicate with other people so, if we have little...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71386430678 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59755576813 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4363244946 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193042835912 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787495808895 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409518148968 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133389800223 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518965715105 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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