It is generally observed in many countries that there is a decrease in the amount of tickets. I think this is a positive development for the country and the reasons I am going to discuss in this essay.
On one hand positive developments include, firstly, during holiday season gives opportunity for many people to easily travel in less costs. Secondly the people who have never travelled through air will get a chance to travel. Finally it leads to development of country by greater benefit to these companies.For instance, it has been observed through the survey that in the last four years there has been multiple increase in travelling done through airline and also business
On the other hand, negative developments leads to primary and main source of air pollution causing carbon gases released into the air following depletion of ozone layer. It also found in a research that many animals are becoming extinct which is a very dangerous issue for a country. Other main important point is people will leave public transport such as train or bus if the costs are very low which again leads to pollution problem.
To conclude, lessening the rates of airline has pro's and con's associated with it. These policies not only help for travelling but also increase business. Moreover, control in rates can also help in reducing pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun costs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ity for many people to easily travel in less costs. Secondly the people who have nev...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...hrough air will get a chance to travel. Finally it leads to development of country by g...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...y by greater benefit to these companies.For instance, it has been observed through ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other hand, negative developments leads to primary and main source of air pollut...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...letion of ozone layer. It also found in a research that many animals are becoming extinct ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01339285714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61711872625 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.153132752 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.3 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151403701993 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622665210809 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544085712757 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985822226527 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779563715757 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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