Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Nowadays, it is getting used to see foreigner in cosmopolitan cities such as New York, Tokyo, Seoul, Vancouver and many others worldwide which means there are many different varieties of culture, race, religion, language and so on. A Variety would be both good and bad for both local people and foreigner. So, the government should ensure that people live in the city harmoniously to increase positive advantage and reduce negative things like crime and racism.
Vancouver is one of biggest and mixed population city in Canada. The Canadian government has their own immigration system and law to help local people and foreigner to live together. First, the government of Canada has strict rule for people who wants to travel, work and study. When do people want to study in Canada, they need to apply study permit with school letter, enrollment letter and bank statement which means they have to prove they are studying in Canada. On the other hand, the Canadian Government invites curtain amount of popular from different countries to give them a chance to work in Canada for one year. It is called “Working Holiday Work Permit”.
The Canadian Government has immigration system, whenever people who want to immigrate, they have to prove their ability to live in Canada. For example, one year working experience is minimum requirement to apply permanent residence even though people who graduate university in Canada and live in Canada more than 10 years. Thus, the Canadian government check people are able to live in Canada independently without the government support.
Finally, Canada is the most popular country which has a lot of immigration popularity from many different countries in the world. The immigration popularity still increases every year and many people want to immigrate to Canada with many economic, cultural and environmental reasons. The Canadian Government would be a global leader that other countries should learn their ideas.
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? 56
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 56
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? 56
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... others worldwide which means there are many different varieties of culture, race, religion, l...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...as a lot of immigration popularity from many different countries in the world. The immigration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, still, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7035804857 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0980480084 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231186836928 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876900684808 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466712953527 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153029797309 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163686858224 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.