A motorway is to be built near your house. As you think that is will destroy areas of natural beauty.
Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter
• Express your views
• Explain what damage will be caused
• Suggest alternative routes
Dear sir,
I am Daniel, resident of Greenwich avenue and senior member of society welfare association. This morning, I read about your motorway construction plan in the local newspaper article. I am writing this letter to express my concern about the same and request you to alter the route.
First of all, I would like to thank you on behalf of all the residents for considering about the development of our society. But unfortunately this highway would not be much beneficial as we already have an underground route towards same destination. Moreover, this construction would demolish the central park and local sports center of our area. Both these amenities have become a necessity of the society people. People of all age group from toddlers to elderly people are regular visitors of central part and the sports centre is only the stress-reliever place of the young children and adults.
You could consider the alternative route plan from the opposite lane to the providence bus stop, which would not affect us by any way. Also the other route would benefit not only us but also some other nearby localities.
I hope you will consider our concern seriously and choose the alternative route for the motor way development.
Yours Sincerely
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., which would not affect us by any way. Also the other route would benefit not only ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08173076923 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73418242137 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0257980633 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0833333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158684992482 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586821547788 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524023347829 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086310144268 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035584494606 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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