some people think that having a set retirement age for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain worker deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age
Do you agree or disagree?
which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement.
It is a debatable topic to determine the correct retirement age. While some people believe that it is unfair to have common retirement age regardless of work and some departments should offer retirements to their employees little earlier. I agree with them and this essay explains the reasons to support my agreement.
The primary reason I accept this belief is that each job has different level of efforts and hard work. For example, we cannot compare the job responsibilities of an army staff with a government school teachers, security jobs are far different and require unique job duties. Deciding a same age for all the employees irrespective of their work-load or demand for the job would not be rational. Another major reason that defend the rule for same retirement age is lack of employment opportunities this means long retirement age restricts the count of new job vacancies. For example, there are certain departments where the youth wanted to work but could not join due to shortage of vacancies.
The jobs that I believe could enjoy early retirements are army jobs because army men's sacrifice a lot in their lives, they work in extreme environment to safeguard the nation and they always give first preference to work in respect of family. giving them early retirement would be a reward to them so that they can enjoy rest of their life. another department that is eligible for early retirement is those government departments where the ratio of job vacancies and eligible candidates for job is not in proportional, this way we could offer more jobs to new talent or the young people.
In conclusion, determining the retirement age is crucial decision. However I strongly believe that there should not be same age for all the work departments, we should always consider various job related factors such as working time, job efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Giving
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Suggestion: Another
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: However,
...the retirement age is crucial decision. However I strongly believe that there should no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00647249191 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77510685261 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521035598706 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2938724795 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17002313211 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765378237108 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649459133467 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129066885499 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681913209969 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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