The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The first chart illustrates the outcome of the examinations conducted randomly for 100,000 people about the purpose of the international travel from 1994 to 1998 by UK residents whereas the second chart describes the locations (Western Europe, North America, and Other Areas) they have visited during the period.
Overall, Most of the people prefer to travel out of the country for spending their holidays and Western Europe is the best choice for maximum number of people with in the period.
From the first chart, In 1994 15246 persons traveled for celebrating their weekends, but counts for business and visiting relatives are about more then one fifths and one sixth of holiday respectively also the dominant population 982 is visiting for other purposes.Next year the travelling population for all other sectors than business are reduced by some percentile whereas it can improve its number by 33. For next 3 years total travelling population is increased constantly for all of the categories and achieved 20,700 , 3,957, 3,181, and 990 respectively which is the highest travel made within 5 years.
In the second chart, About 18,000 of people are travelling Western Europe and North America and other areas has dominant value about more than 1,000 in the year 1994, but the next year people visiting Europe slightly reduced and imposed minimum traveller throughout the period while other part of the world have same population.From 1996, The count of travellers are constantly raising in all 3 parts and have highest abroad traveller in the year 1998, imposes just less than 24,000, 2,000 and 2,500 in a row.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...choice for maximum number of people with in the period. From the first chart, ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s and visiting relatives are about more then one fifths and one sixth of holiday res...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one fifth', 'a fifth', or simply 'fifths'?
Suggestion: one fifth; a fifth; fifths
... visiting relatives are about more then one fifths and one sixth of holiday respectively a...
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Suggestion: Next
...tion 982 is visiting for other purposes.Next year the travelling population for all ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... population is increased constantly for all of the categories and achieved 20,700 , 3,957,...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll of the categories and achieved 20,700 , 3,957, 3,181, and 990 respectively whic...
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Suggestion: From
... part of the world have same population.From 1996, The count of travellers are const...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...e constantly raising in all 3 parts and have highest abroad traveller in the year 1998, impo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 263.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16349809886 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59474950179 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.770829924 43.030603864 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.6 112.824112599 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 22.9334400587 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.8 5.23603664747 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302411649415 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179148731631 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056180700762 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200921758892 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455569236133 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.2329268293 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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