Write a letter to a friend to advice on job or college
Dear Chris,
I'm delighted to hear from you and glad to know that you have completed your schooling. In your letter, you mentioned some concerns selecting between a job or college.
You have just finished your schooling and now I think you should take some time to refresh. I'd suggest you to not go to college for now. It'd become very boring and monotonous. College is a lot more difficult than school. I remember your long absent from school and last minute preparations but in college, this will not work.
At the brighter side, you can utilize this time to do a job. I think the job is much better for you at this time. You will gain experience which will make your CV stronger. It'll also help you to decide the major you want as your profession in the future. As a by-product, you can save a handsome amount for your college fees.
I'd recommend to find jobs in the accounts department, start from a lower designation. You'd love it as you like Finance related subjects. You can also apply for any admin position which would again help you to decide better for your major.
I hope it helped.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Chris, Im delighted to hear from you and glad to ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...k you should take some time to refresh. Id suggest you to not go to college for no...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ndsome amount for your college fees. Id recommend to find jobs in the accounts ...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend finding'.
Suggestion: recommend finding
...ome amount for your college fees. Id recommend to find jobs in the accounts department, start ...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'recommends'.
Suggestion: recommends
...ome amount for your college fees. Id recommend to find jobs in the accounts department...
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Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accounts'' or 'account's'?
Suggestion: accounts'; account's
...es. Id recommend to find jobs in the accounts department, start from a lower designat...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'd
...rtment, start from a lower designation. Youd love it as you like Finance related sub...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39924988278 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9655231019 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.875 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844332339833 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381905595386 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468528947741 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602432153642 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186824706343 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.