In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
All parents care class="about">about what their class="children">children class="do">do and class="learn">learn at class="school">school. Which class="is">is class="why">why many of class="them">them class="have">have questioned if their sons class="should">should class="spend">spend so much valuable class="time">time playing games on physical education clases instead of having extra class="time">time for more "useful" subjects. In the following paragraphs, I class="will">will present the reasons class="that">that lead me to class="think">think class="that">that all high-class="school">school students class="should">should be required to class="have">have a minimum number of hours dedicated to learning and practicing sports at class="school">school.
In the first place, physical education improves kids physical and class="mental">mental class="health">health. class="there">there are many studies showing the class="strong">strong relationship class="between">between practicing sports and having a class="better">better blood pressure, improved circulation and even a class="better">better performance on standarized tests. One seminar study class="about">about this topic was done by professor George class="atwood">atwood in 1958. In class="it">it, class="atwood">atwood concludes class="that">that the evidence collected stuying class="children">children's sports habits during their class="school">school years demonstrated class="that">that those who practiced sports weekly had class="better">better academic results in their tests and highers scores in other cognitive assesments.
Secondly, physical education class="is">is not playing around a sports field aimlessly. class="it">it class="is">is the opportunity for teens to class="learn">learn many crucial soft-skills class="like">like leadership, teamwork and collaboration class="that">that are not always practiced inside the classroom. this class="is">is the class="reason">reason class="why">why many universities in the class="us">us class="take">take applicants sports experience into account when choosing their new generation of freshmens. Furthermore, many of class="them">them offer class="them">them scholarships and grants to convince class="them">them to join their institution because they class="know">know this skills are fundamental for the class="student">student success class="after">after graduation.
Finally, class="it">it class="is">is class="true">true class="that">that the class="time">time spent on physical education could be class="spend">spend in subjects class="like">like English, Math or Science. And thefore, class="it">it class="is">is understandable for parents to class="think">think class="that">that more hours in class means more learning on these courses. However, this class="is">is not always class="true">true. class="it">it class="is">is easy to see this in our daily lives: class="after">after many hours of doing the same thing over-and-over, most people class="will">will get tired and distracted. Reducing their initial perfomance in the task. class="that">that class="is">is class="why">why we class="take">take breaks during work and kids class="have">have breaks class="between">between classes. because we class="know">know humans are not designed to class="do">do something for many hours non-stop.
In conclusion, class="there">there are class="strong">strong reasons to support mandatory physical education classes in the class="school">school curriculum for all ages. Not only because of the known positive class="health">health effects of physical activity, but also because of the many soft-skills learned during the practice of sports. And although this requires having less hours of class for more "academic" subjects, I believe the investment in our kids physical and class="mental">mental class="health">health greatly justifies class="it">it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4601.0 1615.20841683 285% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.5527522936 5.12529762239 206% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.5281402849 2.80592935109 375% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552752293578 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1162.8 506.74238477 229% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.60771543086 168% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.339365189 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.095238095 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0201750405946 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190720398804 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020935598935 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0182635456426 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00429148115565 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 13.0946893788 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -41.88 50.2224549098 -83% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.1 11.3001002004 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 43.91 12.4159519038 354% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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