The bart chart shows the police reports in Johnstown during 2016. The graphic below demostrates the average temperature monthly in the same town.
The bart chart shows the police reports in Johnstown during 2016. The graphic below demostrates the average temperature monthly in the same town.
The first chart presents that the higher police reports belong to traffic violations. The traffic reports are on the top of the chart every year, but tend to decrease a little during summer. Anyway, their are majorityin winter, being eight times more than theft reports.
On the contrary, the noise complaints are the lowest reports all the year. They maintain their humbers with insignificant variations across the period.
The theft reports show a strongly variation during winter to summer. During winter, january to march, they present the lowest scores for a year, but in spring they become to increase untill the summer were the average temperature is more than 23 degrees. At summer the theft reports abruptely grow, being five timer more than in winter.
Overall, there is a positive relation between temperature and theft reports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...emperature monthly in the same town. The first chart presents that the higher po...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e reports belong to traffic violations. The traffic reports are on the top of the c...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ecrease a little during summer. Anyway, their are majorityin winter, being eight time...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('strongly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('variation') instead of another adjective.
...s the period. The theft reports show a strongly variation during winter to summer. During winter,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28301886792 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41810608855 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.046195994 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3636363636 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387911492425 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164639013382 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202145301474 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269812608581 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.367478726049 0.0819641961636 448% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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