You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• Provide information about yourself
• Give details of your previous work experience
• Say why the company should consider you for the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a job vacancy advertised in the NEW CITIZEN newspaper on 2nd of August that is available in the structural design department of your company. Please take into account that I am a structural designer having over 5 years of experience and holding a master’s degree in Civil Engineering from the Sharif University of Technology, which is one of the most reputable universities in Iran.
In fact, I have worked for more than 5 years in the VERESK firm before I moved from Iran. At first, I was responsible for inspecting shop drawing featuring connections. In order for my career prospect to enhance, after 2 years, I commenced designing steel structures, albeit with a supervisor. Currently, I have designed roughly 15 residential buildings individually.
Finally, I suppose that it would be a promising collaboration since your company is multinational and I am a persuasive person who can talk to your clients in English fluently. Apart from conscientiousness and punctuality, my letter of recommendation can demonstrate I possess an ability to meet deadlines that is imperative in our profession.
My curriculum vitae is enclosed which can provide you with further information. I hope that I might be granted an interview.
Yours Faithfully,
Shahin Nejati.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, apart from, i suppose, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22169811321 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37475853862 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1592801015 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198860795959 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614821545215 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05040050026 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933734740312 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310102098157 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.