You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:Give details of your visit to the restaurantExplain the reason f

Dear Sir or Madam,

Please consider this letter as my appreciation for the commendable services we received at your restaurant yesterday. I wanted to extend my appreciation yesterday itself but the staff informed me that you were on leave.

After a lot of speculation and choices, me and my friends decided to fix our monthly kitty party at you restaurant. We were looking for a spacious restaurant and also a location which would be easy for everyone to find. In-fact, we had shortlisted 3 places but the 5 start reviews online made us choose your restaurant.

I would like to compliment the way your staff welcomes their guests and makes them feel comfortable. They all are very polite and professional. In addition,the food was authentic and mouth watering, specially the dessert which tasted just like how my mother would make. It reminded me of her taste.

I would definitely recommend your restaurant to my friends and family. Although I am not active on social media I will make sure to put some good posts about your place. Looking forward to visit again.

Your's Sincerely,
Jane Doe.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ery polite and professional. In addition,the food was authentic and mouth watering, ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ur restaurant to my friends and family. Although I am not active on social media I will ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 187, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
...posts about your place. Looking forward to visit again. Yours Sincerely, Jane Doe.
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97311827957 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79446312637 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.347559983 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1538461538 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248468928467 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762978167715 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515666493392 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13858339261 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490584139189 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.