Living in a safe country is everyone's dream. People would definitely chose a place which is safe for them and their children as their first option to reside. This essay will discuss various causes and ways in which we can deal with the crime rates.
Increase in crime rates are recorded mostly in the developing country or third world country. One of the causes can be uneven distribution of money the within the society. On one hand we have men who are filthy rich and on the other hand lies people who are under poverty line struggling for one time meal. When the poor are not able to manage one time meal they turn to crimes like stealing and kidnapping. Another reason for the hike in criminal activities is because of unemployment. The rate of increasing in population is higher than available employment opportunities. Besides, for a single vacancy there are more than 100 applicants and due to these unbalanced demand and supply the unhappy job-seeker turns to sources where they can make easy money.
Government and the Security officials such as Police should collaborate together and come up which solutions which will help or contribute towards eradicating the criminal activities. Firstly, the government should ensure that each family should have a bread earner and the minimum wages are paid so that they have enough income to pay for their basic needs. Secondly, education plays a vital role in mental and social development of an individual, hence more and more children should be encouraged to attend school. Perhaps, the government can provide special perks to the children who complete their high school and do not drop out. Lastly, the police should make sure that antisocial people are handled correctly so that they do not lure innocent people by giving them false hope.
To conclude every individual should play his part correct. Our country is our safe haven, and it is the responsibility of everyone who resides to contribute towards the betterment of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...veryones dream. People would definitely chose a place which is safe for them and thei...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SAFE_HAVEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...ay his part correct. Our country is our safe haven, and it is the responsibility of everyo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99401197605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58103976873 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6077414942 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1176470588 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937996870649 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347079730035 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653387745797 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500747305454 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626565998753 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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