One of the most serious problems that cities now face is crime. Why are crime rates increasing in cities? What are the most effective measures to tackle crime in urban areas?
Crime is one of the inevitable concerns of the community especially in metropolitan areas. Nowadays, its rate is contiuously rising in number recorded per year which alarms the government to take actions. As this issue would be impossible to bring in zero-crime rate, limiting the occurrence of such undecent cases will make the society feel secured at some point.
There are countless motives that could be considered behind these unlawful actions and one of which is commonly due to poverty. In order to cope with the increasing standard cost of living, some commits to illegal work such as selling prohibited drugs wherein a huge amount of money could be easily collected from different prominent personalities.
Another reason that could be pointed out is because of uncontrolled anger towards the person whom the verdict sets its eyes on. Such conflicts are usually been reported in areas with regard to drinking sessions wherein the involved parties had a misunderstanding and misconception of each other’s sayings and actions.
Be that as it may, these crimes could be avoided if one would know how to handle itself in such challenging circumstances in which resiliency seems necessary. Just as what the common notion of the public says, “no one holds the gratest responsibility of one’s action but oneself alone”. In addition, for those who are situated in security offices should carry out their respective duties properly and should see to it that their designated locale is at peace and safe from the best of their abilities.
Therefore, the community should be cautious and wise for their actions as these maybe the cause of any disputes which contributes the inclination of crime rates. Nevertheless, law enforcers shares the same responsibility in maintaining the state of tranquility in such areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: rising
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30034129693 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95720740837 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631399317406 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4028340774 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115309172403 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447025591308 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441227764105 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623369061727 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430121047734 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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