Do you agree ir disagree that using animals to test safety of cosmetic or drugs used for medical reason is never acceptable?
In this era of new innovations and modern ways of living, development of studies on various matters becomes inperative in many ways. Animals are always involved for such experimental research to conduct initial testing of different products prior to human trials for safety reasons. It is a debatable topic for animals prospect though as one of the medical professionals, I believe that human’s welfare is the most priority.
Drugs are essential for treatment of many diseases. These are made constructively and examined carefully with scientific knowledge and analytical thinking of experts. It aims to promote health and life through diagnosis and proper medication. Take rifampicin drug for example which is given to patients with tuberculosis - one of the communicable diseases. If this disease will not ne treated, it will be a prevalent health problem in a society.
In other cases, there are studies that have been conducted also for cosmetic purposes since looks is already an important aspect nowadays to some public’s point of view. More so, to avoid unwanted results each product undergoes different phases of testing that includes animals which are known to have an almost similar biological system from human’s. For instance, the administration of glutathione intravenously is tested first mostly in rabbits. It would take a great time to observe and study its effects in rabbit’s system. Good findings would mean it is safe and effective; otherwise, this study would be rejected.
To conclude, these motives for using animals in research testing are percieved acceptable and considerable by health disciplines for human’s welfare. This process will surely continue for over the next years as the society’s demands and needs increase undoubtedly in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51798561151 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06862371177 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658273381295 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2853262766 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188887872288 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058358609368 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066362337291 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11303443382 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465818949082 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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