People who are poor in rural areas have limited access to universities. Universities should make it easier for them to have access to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is known that education is one of the basic human rights and that everyone should have it though in real cases, there are people who could not have it given by certain circumstances. While few contend that universities should be more transparent regardless of the applicants’ capabilities, others claim that there must be a standards to follow for an institution to maintain its high-level entity. However, in my belief, it is better that almost all the members of the society should obtain inclusive education in good universities.
First, the more people could have an access to universities which would likely offer a global based knowledge then the more outstanding professionals will be produced that is beneficial to the nation. It is not that education in rural areas provides less competent learnings but there’s a limited number of educational institutions in those regions, hence, the residents turn to find another universities in other places as part of their alternatives instead of having no education at all.
Second, private-owned universities could have an increase in their capitals as more students will be paying tuition fees. Moreover in the business world, this is one of the great opportunities to boost their market standing in terms of the fiscal aspect as long as many could have an easier access to such educational institution. This argument might be biased on behalf of the entrepeneurs, howbeit, the community would also have a credit from it as the owners will allot finances for the improvement and development of the universities which in turn the students would have benefit from it.
In conclusion, having an easier access of education to a lot of universities is advantageous for people from rural regions and is also favorable to the owners of the universities. Thereby, many people will be educated and such industries will improve more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a standard' or simply 'standards'?
Suggestion: a standard; standards
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...s. First, the more people could have an access to universities which would likely offe...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e students will be paying tuition fees. Moreover in the business world, this is one of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, moreover, second, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20261437908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09217337181 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5600519818 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.2 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248601470902 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108352596401 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068778692671 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169298713319 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256278861817 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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