Hi John,
This is Jane your neighbor, I am writing you to bring into your attention towards the litter and garbage in front of our lane.
Let me explain further, from past one month your maid has been constantly disposing the garbage from your house in our garbage bin kept outside our house. As you might be aware each house should have a garbage bin which is absent from your house. Moreover, the waste overflows making our porch dirty and stinking. We have already requested her not to repeat this but she has turned a blind eye towards this matter.
Can you please make sure to discuss this issue with her and find a solution for this problem? . Why don't we buy a bigger waste box which could be used by us both? I would be happy to contribute, it is definitely better than starting the morning seeing litter all over and the bad smell.
Hope you will take actions on this matter as soon as possible.
Your's Faithfully
Jane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John, This is Jane your neighbor, I am writing...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our garbage bin kept outside our house. As you might be aware each house should ha...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r and find a solution for this problem? . Why dont we buy a bigger waste box whic...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...find a solution for this problem? . Why dont we buy a bigger waste box which could b...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s soon as possible. Yours Faithfully Jane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57058823529 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16451701018 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3571947555 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207308776944 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761780707914 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609363413633 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122672697025 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346405734414 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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