More and more people are choosing ready to eat food rather cooking themselves. Is it a positive or a negative trend.
Food is the source of nutrition to the human body providing strength and energy required. In recent time specially the youth of today are very fond of junk food or food that is ready to eat. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the food trend and offer evidence that consuming homemade food are beneficial.
Due to high competition in the business world and in the race to prove themselves the best, many employees of multinational companies work for long hours. They leave home early in the morning and return late in the night leaving them with no time for cooking a good meal for themselves. Junk food or instant noodles seems to be the quickest way they can calm their hunger with.
Fast food are not healthy and do not provide any good nutrition to the body. It is full of Carbs, Fat and Sugar Contents. While we enjoy a burger we forget about the calories we consume and only enjoy the instant happiness which it provides. Ajinomoto is commonly added in the noodles, burgers, Fries, Fried chicken and many more food items to increase the taste, but, it leaves the person thirsty because it dehydrate's the body. Obesity is another result of incorrect food habit. In fact one of the survey which was recently conducted shows that 65 percent of American are obese and their Body Mass Index is higher than the required standard.
If we cook food at home we have plethora of choices such as vegetables, meat, sea food and others. When we cook we can decrease the use of oil or use olive oil which is a healthier choice. We can cook with fresh and organic vegetables and assure a healthier future. There are many ways in which we can take out time and cook our favorite dishes.
To conclude it is correctly said that health is wealth and to take care of our body is our responsibility. Hence, choose correct food and stay healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
...dy is our responsibility. Hence, choose correct food and stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, while, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62048192771 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41684915127 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2888951735 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180867889834 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525870867017 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470888548322 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888929897145 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044147396514 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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