Hi Jean,
Hope you are doing well, I am good and still adjusting with the new environment. It is exciting and at the same time I also miss you and Lucy a lot. Choosing Toronto for my master's course seems to be one of the best decisions.
Currently, I have classes in the morning which gives me ample time to explore the city. Getting use to the time difference is a mammoth task and it is affecting my sleep. However, I make sure to wake up early and reach the university on time. After my classes are over I walk around to make myself familiar with the vicinity. I have also found a small restaurant near my apartment where I am trying new dishes and believe me, the food is delicious.
Toronto is beautiful with diverse culture and welcoming people. Everyone in the college here are helpful and supportive, i have made some friends also and they make sure I do not feel homesick. The future here seems very bright for the IT sector as plethora of job opportunity are available to choose from.
Do reply to this letter, I would love to hear from you.
Best regards
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Jean, Hope you are doing well, I am good and s...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...early and reach the university on time. After my classes are over I walk around to ma...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
.... The future here seems very bright for the IT sector as plethora of job opportunity a...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... love to hear from you. Best regards Jane
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47738693467 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41817691796 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.122302632 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5384615385 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0810476619378 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282941313601 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430581159816 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703934064172 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589021683379 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.