Hi John,
Hope you are doing well, It has been long since we hung out together, Guess what, the pink panther is performing in our town next month and this can be a perfect event to go out together. It would be awesome if you can join me.
As you know the pink pather is famous for its rock music and it will be performing all their famous songs. Moreover, this time they are also introducing their new lead singer Jackson, who was the winner of X factor show which means this would be the last concert for Dory.
The concert is on the 12th of August at the city stadium from 6.00 pm until midnight. We will also get three free drinks included in the ticket cost which is $30 per person. I know the pink panther is your favorite rock band and I am sure this will be a night like our old college days night outs.
Looking forward to a reply from you soon.
Best regards,
Jane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John, Hope you are doing well, It has been lon...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...ng well, It has been long since we hung out together, Guess what, the pink panther ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24705882353 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97349215359 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4682801816 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20443979533 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698262971594 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378616359793 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111121550504 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220821401335 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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