The Internet has made our life easier. Advanced Technology provides us options to avail any content available online with a click of a button and free of charge. This essay will argue about the positives and negatives and support that this development is Moderately adequate.
Let us discuss the benefits, Nowadays people depend hugely on the internet to search for their requirements. A wide variety of books which otherwise are very expensive to buy are also available online through which the children or even adults who could not afford to buy them can acquire. I would like to prominently give an example of IELTS exam materials that are available online, certain students are not financially stable to attend a coaching class and hence might deprive of the practice needed to sit for an exam. Although not 100% but still, these materials help the aspirants to understand the pattern and attempt the exam. All the reason above does make it a favorable development for the people.
Every coin has two sides and so if this Modern technology is beneficial it has few adverse effects too. Movies and songs are a mammoth task to create, one spends months or even years to develop and movie script or a musician puts in a lot of hard work to come up with a song. The budget is high and the Producers depend solely on the public to earn profits. When the spectators watch the movie the producers earn money. Even though a large group of people goes to the theater there are certain people who download them and watch the movie at home. This decreases the revenue which is a big disadvantage.
As agreed moderately with this idea to conclude we can say that technology has flourished through years and made our life easier but a limited download policy can be applied to the part where this facility hampers the economic value of the contents.
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- your friend is having problems getting on with a colleague at work. He/she has written to you for some adviceIn your letter-Thank your friend for their letter- suggest some ways your friend could improve the situation- offer some encouragement 89
- Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extend is this a positive or a negative development? 84
- Many working people get little or no experience or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.Why do many working people not get enough exercise?What can be done about this problem? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76947040498 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49477671755 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0042961425 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222818165223 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655446122695 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578362284253 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126815761709 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537708546795 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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