Self-studying is a crucial part of education. Some people believe that studying at home play a significant role where as other favor the idea that there should be no homework for the children after school. In my opinion homework helps in development of the child and induces discipline in them. This essay will discuss both the views and indicate why home-works in fact is an effective idea.
Certain people are not in the favor that teachers should give home work to the children. They believe that kids should spend a quality time playing and involving in activities other than studies which help in the overall development of the child. However, this might not be true because if the students spend their time in other curricular activities, they might not remember what they have been taught in the school which in return may impact their performance in the exams. A survey conducted in England involved 2 groups of children where one group were given homework whereas the other group did not study after school, The results of their exam stated clearly how everyday studying helped group one. All students passed the exams unlike group 2 where 3 children failed and their average score was low.
On the other hand, a significant number of parents believe that homework plays a vital role supporting the children in their education. Apparently, it is suggested that we spent an hour or two revising and understanding the lessons learned in the school, this helps us to remember the topic and lays a foundation on which we can grow. Practice will make us perfect and it has never hindered the personality of any student, I strongly support this idea that self-study definitely builds a strong base. This was proved recently by a survey at Oxford University where they asked questions to the pupil from previous day’s lesson and it was derived that students who refreshed the lessons at home were able to answer most of the questions.
In conclusion, Even though, some people think homework should not be given to the children, which is opposite to what others believe that it plays an important role in education of the child. I think homework contributes towards the development of the children and disciplining them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...tudying at home play a significant role where as other favor the idea that there should ...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'revising' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'revises'.
Suggestion: revises
... suggested that we spent an hour or two revising and understanding the lessons learned i...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is opposite to what others believe that it plays an important role in education ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95212765957 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60281997018 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9583657244 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.133333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375627496922 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132099533685 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122510487897 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261565038744 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113529998005 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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