Some people think that advertisements are good for the society whereas others oppose this view.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Over a period of time, advertisement has become the most popular strategy for marketing and promoting the products or services. It has brought significant change in the pattern of expenditure and consumption in the society. Some people support the idea of advertising a product, whereas others think that it brings a negative impact on the society. I will discuss both the views in my essay.
On one hand, advertising is an effective way of spreading the awareness among people about the use of new and existing products. Moreover, it enables the customers to compare a product with other competitive products available in the market, so that they decide whether a product is worth buying or not. Advertisements help in educating the society about various health and safety issues. Additionally, it is the best way to raise the demand for the products.
On the other hand, it stimulates people for impulsive buying by providing different promotional offers. As a result, instead of saving spend their money on purchasing unnecessary goods. Sometimes, through advertising some companies provide exaggerated and unrealistic review of their products. Consequently, people are misguided and cheated by such marketing tricks. Moreover, it only highlights the positive characteristics of a product and tries to hide its negative aspects.
In Summation, certainly, the production and innovation of goods and services have increased due to industrialisation. Nevertheless, as a result of advertisements, the gap between the producers and consumers has also narrowed. In my opinion, although advertisements have both negative and positive impact on the society, but the benefit of providing awareness outweighs any negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
Over a period of time, advertisement has become the most popu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53787878788 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27408606753 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0153771647 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240526392442 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690449305157 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702712146495 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135282797539 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754886803756 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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