Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student of your institute studying in batch number 67 of working professionals in the evening. I am writing to you to inform that I might not be able to pursue this course further.
As you are aware that I am being employed with one of the leading product based IT company of our region and my office timings are 8 to 5. However, we have to sometimes extend due to client commitments and when there are website deployments. Since our project is undergoing this critical phase, I am finding it really hard to make both ends meet and I have not been able to attend few classes last week. Therefore, in my better interests, I may not be able to continue the coaching at this moment, especially when my performance is getting observed closely.
Once our workload reduces, I could join back. I would also be looking for batches operational over the weekends rather than on weekdays. This would surely help me in learning the course better and with more motivation and passion.
I hope you understand my concern and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Hary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ith one of the leading product based IT company of our region and my office timings are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6887755102 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64946282659 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663265306122 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9924403432 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197904607371 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069235254515 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577227155019 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121297139473 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563522489563 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.