The charts below give information on the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2002 and projection for 2050.
Given are the pie charts illustrating the population of two distinct countries, namely Yemen and Italy, in terms of three different age groups in 2000 and predicting for five decades later.
Looking at the information, it is noticeable that more people who aged from 15 to 59 years old are forecasted in Yemen while the majority of Italian population will belong to the senior group.
In the year 2000, over half of Yemeni population were less than 15 years old, followed closely by the figure for 15-59-year-old residents, at precisely 45.3%. Meanwhile, the dominant proportion in Italy’s chart was recorded by people ageing 15-59 years old, merely six-tenth, four times as much as the rate of the youngest group. Additionally, there was a big difference in the percentage of elderly people between Yemen and Italy, with 3.6% and 24.1%, respectively.
The next 50 years are predicted to see a surge of nearly 10% in the percentage of 15-59-year-old Yemeni citizens and a sharp decrease in the figure for the children and teenager group to just over one-third. In stark contrast, the size of the senior population in Italy will expand twofold to 42.3% in 2050 while a minor increase is projected for this statistic of Yemen.
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... projected for this statistic of Yemen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99514563107 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86136534396 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.2307013302 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216002205772 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109067734859 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761523815478 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142840996403 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384350811855 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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