You work for an in the international company. you have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
. Describe the training course you want to do.
.explainwhat the company could do to help you.
. say how the course will be useful for your job.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform about my interest in joining the training course which is scheduled to happen next month at the community center in our area.
Yesterday while working on some of the assigned tasks, I saw an advert regarding the advanced networking program on one of the news website.
The duration of the course is one month, so, to join, I need off for that duration and if it is not possible to grant leave for the long duration, I can work from home or come to office after the session for the day.
When I checked the details of the coaching, I suddenly realised that our team lacks the advanced security handling of the servers, which is the key aspect of this training and it will be beneficial for our company if any person from the networking division joins this course. As you know, last year, we face the security threat due to some third party attack on our servers and our organisation also suffer from severe loss, so, in my opinion, this can help us strengthen our firewalls and networks.
I am waiting for the positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Rupali Mahajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...our area. Yesterday while working on some of the assigned tasks, I saw an advert regardi...
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Line 16, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, Rupali Mahajan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, then, third, while, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71859296482 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43453723346 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4512631115 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 76.5299724578 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 4.34317383033 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220954616263 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927625501843 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370858087078 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995539834398 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329994637579 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.