Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past. Yet, people increasingly suffering from fitness and diet related disease. Why is happening? what can be done to prevent it?
Nowadays Peoples are having more awareness about their health when compare to their grandparents. Even though they affected by some health issues like sugar, blood pressure, cholesterol because of not maintaining their diet.
This sickness is mainly caused by food. In the food it must have an equal proportion of protein, fat , carbohydrates. But nowadays people consume fast-food once in a day. It's not advisable to eat daily. Because it has some preservatives to prevent food from spoilage. It's too harmful for human health.
However in the olden days people had their fitness during their young days. For example, my grandfather was a farmer. They work hard in the farm to burn the fat from the eaten food. He did not have any health issues like this yet. Because of their food style. They ate only organic items. But nowadays getting of pure food is very difficult due to the variety of pesticides used in agriculture.
Olden people are not even went any gym or activities. Because they did some work for their consumption of food. So it teach us to burn the fat by hard work. Mostly avoiding outside food is the way to balance your health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a day. Its not advisable to eat daily. Because it has some preservatives to prevent fo...
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...t have any health issues like this yet. Because of their food style. They ate only orga...
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Message: Did you mean 'teaches'?
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...rk for their consumption of food. So it teach us to burn the fat by hard work. Mostly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 198.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52466432447 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.5024630542 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4142369066 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.2105263158 104.977214359 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.4210526316 20.9669160288 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.73684210526 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 2.91625615764 377% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125241315264 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391087455425 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458820872933 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841363494673 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275965906691 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 12.6369458128 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 53.1260098522 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.9458128079 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.2 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.3980295567 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.5123152709 57% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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