Science tells there are activities that are good for health. However, some people still continue doing unhealthy habits. Why is this so and what changes can be done ?
Nowadays, numerous people are aware about the healthy habits, but still they adopt unhealthy lifestyles. I will portray few reasons and the path to change these unhealthy habits in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some motives of unhealthy habits. First reason is over dependency on technology. Many people do their whole work with the help of machinery. Now individual become very lazy at home as well as their offices. For instance, they use an oven in homes for making food. Also, they use laptops in offices for their work and for comfortable lifestyle. But, they never realize that it’s unhealthy for them. Moreover, masses have very busy schedule, which do not grant them to cook at homes.
On the other side, people have to shift their unhealthy habits. First of all, they should always follow good habits and they have to avert the extra usage of technology. They have to avoid over consumption of oily food. They have to do some work out when they eat fast food. For example, they have to do exercises, yoga in their daily routine. Moreover, people need to manage their time and to decline their dependency on technology and should always do some physical works.
To sum up, people need to sustain a balance among the physical work and the use of technology in order lead to healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82894736842 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39161402325 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3198321426 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7647058824 104.977214359 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173425343706 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649978245278 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463658974068 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106677856465 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470517697646 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 12.6369458128 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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