with the rise in the use of internet facilities result in the generation of several problems in our society discuss the problems and solutions?
To begin with, internet is the important part of our life but the over use of internet causes many problem in our society. children spent the all time on internet to playing games, watching movies and videos, listening songs etc they would not serious about their study they compromise with their future as well as they easy access the adult sites that creates mental and the physical problems. the rise in the internet facilities also increases the hacking problem. For example the american F16 data is hacked by the soviet union. hackers stolen the data of large companies through internet.
On the other hand, there are many solution to protect the society from these problems. the important solution is make advance cyber security that protect our data from the hackers. secondly parents should aware about the wrong uses of the
internet and they also look their children activities. an parents should not give mobile phones to their small children. some adult websites should be banned by government as well as the data limit also set according to the age of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...ife but the over use of internet causes many problem in our society. children spent the all ...
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Suggestion: Children
...net causes many problem in our society. children spent the all time on internet to playi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g movies and videos, listening songs etc they would not serious about their study...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ates mental and the physical problems. the rise in the internet facilities also in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hackers
...F16 data is hacked by the soviet union. hackers stolen the data of large companies thro...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many solutions'.
Suggestion: many solutions
...ternet. On the other hand, there are many solution to protect the society from these probl...
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Suggestion: The
...rotect the society from these problems. the important solution is make advance cybe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... solution is make advance cyber security that protect our data from the hackers. ...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...that protect our data from the hackers. secondly parents should aware about the wrong us...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: An
...ey also look their children activities. an parents should not give mobile phones t...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ey also look their children activities. an parents should not give mobile phones t...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: an parent; parents
...ey also look their children activities. an parents should not give mobile phones to their ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... mobile phones to their small children. some adult websites should be banned by gov...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ile phones to their small children. some adult websites should be banned by gover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1207.87684729 75% => OK
No of words: 181.0 242.827586207 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97237569061 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25949964923 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 379.143842365 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4828546726 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235815933815 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974098862336 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114836483057 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133949969985 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974252493386 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.