some people think that students benefits from going to private schools, other, however feel that private secondary schools can have negative effect on society as a whole. discuss both views and give your opinion?
surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals private schools has been the one of prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always held some conflicting views on this. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
The first and foremost view is that, there are many advantages of private schools. Firstly,in private schools the education facilities are more than government schools. Moreover, teachers of the private schools are well qualified As a result student learn many extra knowledge from teachers . Moving further, the infrastructure of private schools are very good.
Apart from this, there are many disadvantages of private schools. Firstly, the fees of private schools are very high sometimes people not pay the fees of schools in this condition government schools are very good choice for people. Moreover,teachers of private schools give extra assignments to students but it increase the stress of learners.
In conclusion, there are many merits and demerits of private schools. private schools education is very good as well as the private schools organize many new activities related to education in this way students learn many extra new knowledge but on the other hand private schools expenses are more than government schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40186915888 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80270285987 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518691588785 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1422117959 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32203304511 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131563965152 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375871051437 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213866337284 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211413279362 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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