The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Since 1970's it is an important issue to discuss about animal rights. Some people say they have freedom like us, so we need to consider of their emotion and feeling. some of them say animals are danger to human life, so they s be banded in zoos. In my view sometimes zoos protect animals but they hurt by limitation of the place where they have been restricted.
In zoos, animal welfare teams are trying to protect the animals but people think they are hurting animals. The purpose of welfare team is to safeguard the animals and providing medical treatment . For instance, recently national geography magazine released, animal welfare team in Chennai they protect the deer from public disturbance.
On another hand, people want zoo to be banned in nation because their freedom is restricted by the limitation of certain area itself. So, they felt bad and make them frustration and depressed feel, from that emotion they could not retrieve.
In conclusion, in this debate is not for ban or not ban. I think it is all concerning for safeguard animals from this cruel environment. According, to the study zoos are more helpful to survey peaceful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92346938776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50017392268 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7571538483 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25859114127 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994952839101 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563787175444 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149844506624 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486347245197 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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