Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket while some others prefer to shop online. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Online groceries shopping has become increasingly popular these days. Some people believe that supermarkets are better place to shop for food, while other believe that online food shops are better. In this essay I will discuss both the views and provide my opinion about the same.
On one side, online food shopping is advantageous in many ways. When we shop for eatable items through internet, we get massive variety of food that would not be possible in one or two supermarkets. Along with that, these days, we get great deals for shopping online thus we could save a lot of pennies out of our groceries budget. An additional comfort benefit that online food shopping websites provide is also remarkable, For example we could order our groceries by seating on couch or watching our favorite TV show, however this could not be possible if we had to visit the supermarket personally for food shopping.
On the other side, purchasing food from supermarkets has its own benefits. If we go out for shopping at-least for food, it give us the opportunity to interact with people rather than isolate ourselves by even ordering eatable items through internet. Also we could examine the details of eatable product such as its expiry date, its ingredients or so on, more easily if we buy it personally rather than online. Most of the supermarkets today also offer the tasting feature such as we could taste different ice-cream flavors before ordering the final ice-cream. Moreover, due to high competition in the market, many of the food stores provide coupons and reward points that we could use for our next shopping, this is just like an icing on a cake.
To conclude, in this modern world we could buy food online and offline as well, both of the options have their own advantages. But, in my opinion shopping for eateries personally from the supermarket is better as it gives better options for tasting and examining the products we buy, it also saves money by decent discount offers available on stores.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
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Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89442815249 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54878695877 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.494897744 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276310829815 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110774932502 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855032516229 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202963778967 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108580562995 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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