Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?.
In this contemporary world, being successful in life and accomplishment goals is depends on many factors. It is generally believed that people from particular region are more successful in specific field. This contentious topic has been profoundly debated on several forums. I feel if a person belongs to a region which has more successful people always help him to achieve his goals but it more depends on his own will power and hard work. I will reason my instance meticulously before inclining towards rational conclusion.
Throwing light on my view, I feel that individual's success merely depends on his hard work because hard work is only way to achieve any goal. Any person who work dedicated for his goals is able to achieve them with prolonged practice. Moreover, if he belongs to a region of successful people it just inspires him but to achieve those goals dedications play more important role. To illustrate, Abdul kalam is good example to showcase that a person can achieve anything even though he does not have any support from his backgrounds.
Juxtaposed my view, many people reckon that if a person belongs to a region there are more chances that he will be successful. A child who has plenty of local story of successful people is more motivated. Moreover, knowledge received from surrounding can help any individual to start more smoothly.
To reiterate, even though surrounding effect a person in positive way, it is his own continuous work toward goal which helps him in his accomplishments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... Throwing light on my view, I feel that individuals success merely depends on his hard work...
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Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which helps him in his accomplishments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04365079365 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85840745823 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2396728498 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20404965955 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858243096314 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062582244025 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135831380695 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722659692017 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.