Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss
In this contemporary world, one of the most controversial topics is related to individuals spending more time on their professional work and its negative impacts on their personal lives. Some people have opined that it has benefits for their professional life if they work more. Whereas, a segment of society considers it as negative for their health and personal life. This contentious topic has been profoundly debated on several platforms. I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages meticulously before implicating a rational conclusion.
Throwing light on the advantages, modern world become more competitive which means a person has to put more efforts to survive in these situations. Every profession has lots of areas to work which requires a good amount of time to complete the work. Moreover, to become a successful person more dedication is required to focus and present yourself better than others. For example, Elon Musk spends 14 hours a day for his work that makes him a successful person.
Paradoxically, not providing sufficient time for your personal life can have lot of consequences in later times. A person who does not provide proper time for family ends up in a family problem. Furthermore, it also has health and psychological drawbacks because continues work increase stress in a person’s life. For instance, according to BBC reports 40% people in IT sector are facing stress related issues.
To reiterate, a person has to balance his personal and work timings to lead a successful life. Even though, current scenarios required more efforts, family and health are more important for any individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25954198473 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95917485274 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.205881717 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371663702032 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126338300929 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896110550319 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228335772765 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604754549924 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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