These days it has become a growing trend to see people spending too much time working and spends less time creating a personal life. There is a widespread worry that this could affect the mental state of person. In my opinion, this proposition merits serious consideration and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are a myriad of reasons accountable for this behavior. The most conspicuous one is that, everything is competitive in this fast pacing world and people have forgotten about themselves. Everything is evolving fast and people in order survive and to keep up with these changes, forget about themselves in the process and hardly spend no time in their personal life. For example, people need money to survive in this contemporary world and in order get that money they are working hard and non stop without caring about personal health and hygiene.
Another overt facet of this behavior is that this can lead to severe health problems both physical and mental. A person who consider work as their only life will gradually start to develop problems. For example, you might not really notice it, but work stress can release the hormone cortisol, which is hard on your heart. This in turn can increase your risk for stroke, coronary artery disease, type 2 diabetes, and even cancer. And also the lack of sleep and piling on of undue stress lead to high blood pressure, unhealthy eating, and other actions that negatively impact health.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that the problems that generate by spending too much time at work and hardly not having any time for personal life are indeed too dire to ignore. No work is worth doing if it can cause you harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85185185185 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38784878281 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8456834631 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418511608909 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125149291846 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148382429625 0.071462118173 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263798123051 0.151781067708 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114750257978 0.0609392437508 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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