One of the most conspicuous trend of today's education system is including old plays of our culture and values, written by great authors. These days, it has became a growing trend to see people argue that studying and working related to old theatre play in high schools has both benefits and problems to it. The following paragraphs will discuss the positive and negative side of this approach with relevant example.
There are a deluge of benefits to children learning and working with old plays. The most preponderant one is that it will help in developing creativity in students minds. Dealing and engaging with masterpiece plays all times will reshape students mind and thoughts. And also encouraging young student to work and play old drama's will help them to get a good perspective of the old times. For example, a medieval play based on war of ancient times will help student realize the hard work, pain, and sacrifices led by the old heroes to grant us our freedom.
On the other hand, these plays also have a negative side. Even though they have many cultural values and information's, some play focuses on the superstitions of old times. Working with this will encourage a student to take up those superstition in life. For example, there are many plays that give prior importance to men and does not consider women's values. This will make them get a bad perspective of women.
In view of the arguments mentioned above, on can agree that there are numerous benefits and and problems of studying and work related to old theatre play in high schools. In my opinion, the benefits outdo the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53628364336 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6891252948 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35719521524 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11789816478 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104951173759 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238266341304 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931250293049 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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