One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is the colossal upsurge of space travel. Space travel is fantastic; however, so many people claims that the public funding should be focused on environmental problems. In my opinion, this notion merits consideration and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are a myriad of environmental problems in the present world that could lead to a major catastrophe and even extinction of mankind on earth. For example, the ozone layer are depleting day by day, the temperature and pollution is soaring through the roof, and the ice in the artic is melting. Desperate time need for desperate measures, and our prime focus should be on saving our planet rather than finding a alternative in the space. Space exploration is only possible if the inhabitants are safe and healthy.
Another overt facet of my argument is that, scientist's and billionaire's view space as a place to go when we trash this planet. But the reality is that there is no known substitute for our planet in the space. They are spending thousands of crores in finding a replacement rather than keeping this one alive. Earth is one in million gift and we should protect it.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that even though both sectors have an important role and should be given equal opportunity, under the current scenario we should primarily focus on funding to find a remedy for the environmental problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...raphs. To commence with, there are a myriad of environmental problems in the presen...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n saving our planet rather than finding a alternative in the space. Space explora...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...keeping this one alive. Earth is one in million gift and we should protect it. From ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76266827542 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4492063431 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295803769717 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917326545739 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917359416883 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168049470022 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533851527529 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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