One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the overpackaging provided even for simple products. The notion that, is it the responsibility of producers to avoid overpackaging or is it the consumers duty is widely debated. In the following paragraphs, I will explain why I think it is the responsibility of both to resist over packaging of products.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that, the reason why producer should avoid overpackaging is that, why do overpackaging when usual packaging do the same work. It is also causing a lot of harms to the environment we live in. For example, each years a lot of trees are cut for the manufacture of packaging products. This will have a huge toll in the nature. It is also the same case when using plastic materials for packaging. What people often do is that, they throw the extra packaging. If it is made of plastic, it will lay on ground hindering the growth plants.
Another pivotal aspect of my argument, why consumers also have a responsibility is that, why bother buying new carry bags when you can reuse your old carry bags. For example, what often happen is that, when you are in super market buying products, they will bill you extra for the extra carry bags. In these kind of situation you can just use your old carry bags from the recent purchase for this. That you will save both your spending's and environment.
In view of arguments mentioned above, one can conclude the responsibility of both consumers and producers in overpackaging. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...ers to avoid overpackaging or is it the consumers duty is widely debated. In the followin...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...r packaging of products. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... you extra for the extra carry bags. In these kind of situation you can just use your old ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78091872792 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92101571029 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491166077739 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1746054039 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183603125021 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560033123267 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060201575786 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119687810689 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335572826887 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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