Belching is the process of releasing excess wind in the stomach or upper intestine through the mouth, also known as burping or belching. In today's modern office belching and unauthorized behaviour of such kind is not acceptable. I agree with these decisions and in the following essay, I will explain why this apprehension is warranted and should not be rejected.
There are myriads of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that it will result in workplace conflict among employees. Even though belching is a biological process, it is inappropriate in the workplace and is unacceptable. For example, the view of people belching and the irritating smell and sound make people uncomfortable. This will create a huge workplace conflict and will tamper with the equilibrium of an office.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that a good relationship among employees is the backbone of an ideal organization. Maintaining the balance between employees is of the most important. An organisation will only be successful if it has a good relationship with its customers, and it is not possible to create a good relationship with customers if there is no relationship between its employees. So the organization and its HR representatives should be responsible for creating a good workplace environment.
in views of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that eliminating belching and unauthorised behaviour in modern offices is a great benefit for everyone. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and should not be rejected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...eating a good workplace environment. in views of the arguments outlined above, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.288 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28365649848 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1238222748 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167430779412 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055856290167 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520036239667 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10910688476 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421712722329 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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