The term happiness describes the feeling of positive or pleasant emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy. Is money a major factor that brings happiness to one's life is a controversial question of all time. In the following paragraphs, I will try to describe why I think happiness not only depends on money, it also depends on one's personal likes and dislikes.
Life satisfaction, subjective well-being, flourishing, and so on represent happiness in life. Money is often considered as the only reason for happiness, but it is only one of the reasons or factors that merely an outcome. Although money can make your life easier it does not fulfill the true level of happiness. We cannot gain life satisfaction or the meaning of life and many other things only by depending on money. There are many other things to life other than money.
People should focus more on fulfilling their own dreams and less on making money. Happiness is the outcome of doing what you like to do and fulfilling your dreams. Meeting your friends, playing games, spending quality time with your family are the things that bring happiness. In the end, even if you have money it will be the good old quality days that will bring a smile to your face.
In conclusion, money is just a mere factor in bringing happiness, there are several other things that are important than money. In my opinion, people should put more on the important things that they have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81048387097 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58693474977 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.447465542 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2142857143 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339003402642 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110030563354 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796151526676 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191805295003 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586320130724 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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